Brittany Molnar

I enjoyed reading your first post about your life to get to know you before reading all of your posts. I would also love the opportunity to study abroad in Europe one day; hopefully you get to! I know we have already been in a group together, but I enjoyed reading the rest of your posts and having the opportunity to see your opinion on a variety of topics. Overall, I think you had great posts and put good effort into each assignment to have a well-constructed blog by the end of the semester.

One of your strengths as a writer is your ability to reflect on what you read and put it into words in a way that the readers enjoys what is being said. This is evident in all of your posts, and I think that it greatly improved by the end of the semester. I would suggest that you reference the sources more often to give your opinions more credibility to someone who has not read the essay you are writing about, but other than that, I enjoyed reading all of your posts.

My favorite post of yours was "CRASH..." because it painted such a picture as to what happened that day with Nancie and her mom, and also gave more awareness about drunk driving and how incredibly dangerous it is. I enjoyed reading your post "Humans vs. Computers" because not only did you give information from the source, but also put your own opinion at the end, which strengthened the whole piece. Even though you did disagree with Minsky, you explained why based off of what he said, and I think you did a great job. Another wonderful post that you wrote was "Who's to really say" because it was evident that you put in a lot of time thinking about what an idea really is, and you asked questions at the end which left me thinking even more about what an idea is. You answered a lot of questions and left more, which would also allow for a great essay.

You did a great job this semester and I enjoyed reading your posts and opinions. Good luck on finals and the rest of the school year!